Coming into ILS I had no idea what to expect. A friend of mine told me that in his ILS class they worked on writing one paper the entire time. To be honest I was not looking forward to this. It was a pleasant surprise when I found out we were writing in blogs. I have never written in a public forum such as a blog and I was excited to finally use a blog. I did not expect to learn as much as I did in this class. Never before have I learned about rhetoric like this. This class opened up a whole new world of communication to me. It allowed me to analyze my communication as well as the communication of people around me. Never again will I listen to a politician speak without listening for a straw man fallacy. In the future I will be able to balance the amount of pathos, logos and ethos in my arguments. I learned how to not only speak more effectively, but also listen more effectively to arguments posed by other people. Overall I am very satisfied with what I am taking from this class.
Monday, May 10, 2010
Can Language Capture the Enormity of Experience?
Can Language Capture the Enormity of Experience?
My first impression is no. When thinking of my life experiences I cannot imagine trying to fit them on pages. Personally I like hiking and being outdoors. I really have an appreciation of nature. For me to try to take the beauty, tranquility and the sublime aspects of nature and put them into words would not do them the justice they deserve, especially with my writing and communication skills. I do not believe that anyone has the ability or mastery of language to be able to truly capture an experience such as hiking in the mountains. I know that there are some authors and storytellers that can paint a vivid picture of a scene but in my experiences, nothing can bet the real thing. Although I am more of a visual person, I think that the actual experience is more powerful. It is the experience that inspires a person. The experience is what creates the language in order to try and capture the experience.
Language, when used the right way, can almost capture the experience. Although I don’t think that language can completely capture the experience, I think that language is just as important. Language serves to allow people to live through experiences that they would otherwise not be able to. Language allows people to gain knowledge and wisdom experiences otherwise out of reach for many people. This being said, I believe that a person’s personality and characteristics are based strongly on life experiences. Experiences are something that for the most part have to be first hand.
Saturday, May 8, 2010
Closing Thoughts!
Language and the Enormity of Experience
When I think about the impact of language on a reader, I think of the time I read the book Where the Red Fern Grows in my childhood. Never has a book affected me so much, that I could not keep myself from crying throughout the entire ending. Though I knew it was just a fictional book, for some reason I sympathized so much for the boy and his dogs. To me this was a book that knew its audience, and knew how to communicate effectively to deliver a feeling that could incorporate all the right emotions to truly impact the reader. Hypothetically, though, if this was a true story, I still do not believe that it would be possible to understand the connections and relationships between the characters or the impact of the events, without being there—seeing, feeling, smelling, hearing every interaction taking place.
Likewise, earlier in the semester we heard about the story of Joannie Rochette, who lost her mother before a big Winter Olympic performance. Needless to say, no one will ever relate to the immensity of her experience without having lived it, even through countless interviews and articles about the incident. Her experiences are too unique for anyone to fully understand it through language because it involves all of the senses to fully encompass the entirety of the event.
I believe the impact of language can only go so far. It can evoke empathy and several emotions, but I don’t think it can fully describe the enormity of the experience itself. To be able to say you know exactly how a person feels when their loved one dies is actually rather insensitive because it is impossible to put yourself in someone’s shoes completely. Events can affect one person completely different than the next, and language can often hide or forget about the little aspects of the experience that can only come from being in the situation at the time.
Thursday, May 6, 2010
Can language capture the complexity and enormity of experience?
Sunday, April 11, 2010
Pathos in Public Discourse
Pathos in Today's Society
Monday, March 8, 2010
Pet Peeves in Language
Everyone has his or her own pet peeves. These pet peeves range from physical annoyances to spoken language. For example I have a specific pet peeve with a common habit in our spoken language. I find it irritating when people I do not know very well give me generic nicknames. Common examples include sport and buddy. I feel like using one of these nicknames sounds degrading. It makes the speaker sound overconfident and as if they think they are above their audience. My least favorite nickname is “buddy.” I do not want to sounds mean but if I’m not friends with someone I do not like it when they refer to me as their “buddy.” I really do not mind when my friends or family give me nicknames, in fact I have nicknames for almost all of my friends. Personally I think that a nickname is a sign of friendship, which takes time to earn. Calling people by generic nicknames is a sign of disrespect. I would never use the term “sport” to refer to anyone I respected or wanted to make a good impression on, and I assume most people think the same. It almost seems like calling someone by his or her first name is becoming formal.
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
Cognitive Fluency
Monday, March 1, 2010
Response to Cognitive Fluency
Also, the point the article had that we base beauty or attractiveness based off of common ideas of beauty or attractiveness is interesting, and it makes one stop and think about how true that really is. With TV shows these days emphasizing lifestyles of celebrities and society-interpreted standards of acceptance and beauty, viewers are exposed to the ideal. This becomes imprinted in our brains, and from then on we only see beauty in what is familiar to the ideal. Faces become regular prototypes for the mind’s basis of familiarity. For example, from some of my observations there is a weird coincidence with people being in relationships with a person that looks oddly similar to one of their siblings. This creepy coincidence probably has something to do with this idea of cognitive fluency. As we grow up, we see more of our family than anyone else in our life, and it may just be nature to become familiar with these faces and look for someone else to spend such comparable time with that has a relatable face, proving your life may stay consistent and fluent if you’re surrounded by similar, familiar faces continually. Though this is just a strange theory, I think it is easily applicable to this idea of cognitive fluency.
Thursday, February 18, 2010
One Kick
The soccer ball sliced through the air, dipping and diving as the crowd watched silently, all their hopes and dreams resting on this one free kick that would determine the whole season; incidentally the player had taken this exact kick thousands of times in practice but this time the ball curved like never before as it grazed the goalies outstretched fingers, knocked off the post and eventually rested in the back of the net as thousands of fans flooded the field in celebration of the United States’ first World Cup victory.
Monday, February 15, 2010
I will never defecate you.
As I looked into the toilet with a long brown lumpy swirl, the pungent scent burned my nostril and my eyes couldn’t help but water in disgust, knowing and realizing, that is a part of me, a part that may never return, graciously giving away what I have worked so hard to produce, once again, like always, I have left behind a dear friend; a friend that I know will never forsake me, sometimes making me grunt at how painful the memories of the times we’ve had, sometimes the pleasure I was given, I shall never forget you, but your memory will live on the next time I squat.
Thursday, February 11, 2010
Sentence
Wednesday, February 10, 2010
Periodic Sentence
Saturday, February 6, 2010
"If you are going through hell, keep going" - Churchill
Live Everyday Like It’s Your Last
These are six words that I try to live my life by. The thing about this saying that really interests me is the different degrees of how literal to take this advice. If I were to take this completely seriously I would be on my way to the airport with a bag full of clothes and a head full of thousands of places I’ve always wanted to see. I think if someone actually just packed up and left that they would be taking this advice in the wrong way. It isn’t supposed to leave you broke and homeless. Just like every piece of advice, this saying should be taken with a grain of salt. My interpretation is that I shouldn’t live my life planning on having a future guaranteed. Too many people work around the clock so that they can be rich when they are older. My problem with that thinking is that tomorrow is not promised today.
Although short and concise, this phrase can trigger very complicated thoughts. This phrase is basically asking you if you died tomorrow, would you be content with your life. It is asking if you lived the best life you could. It is not asking how well you planned out your life but how do you feel about yourself today. This phrase makes you judge your whole life. It puts you in a place where you can truly look at your life.
When I think of this phrase I ask myself if I’m happy. Basically I try to be happy everyday just incase its my last. I don’t want to go out sad. This does not mean that I live everyday in fear of death; instead it means that I try not to let opportunities pass because who knows if I’ll get another chance. This phrase encourages me to take chances in my life. It steers me away from the dreary future of a cubicle. It keeps my life exciting. It keeps my life dreams fresh in my mind. Personally I want to travel the world. Many people share this dream with me, but many people also bury this dream behind years of college and adulthood and marriage because that is what is expected of them. In our society it is not accepted to drop everything and act on an impulse. We as a people feel very comfortable with plans. We are expected to have our whole lives planned out by now. I don’t agree with that. I have no idea what I will want to do with my life in twenty years and I don’t think I should be expected to know. It is sad to me how many people put their hopes and dreams to the back of their mind when they’re still young and by the time they remember them they are gone. When I’m old I want to be able to look back and remember all the great things I did. I don’t want to look back and realize all the things I never accomplished because I was afraid to act on impulse.
At first glance this phrase gives off a sense of fear. Almost like it is trying to scare you into changing your life, but that would be the wrong way of interpreting it. It is trying to instill a sense of fearlessness in the reader. It is urging the reader to drop everything and follow their deepest desires and dreams. To do what would seem crazy to everyone else, but in reality make you the happiest person alive. Because in the end all that matters to me is that I lived my life to the fullest and I always made the best out of it. Since I don’t know when the end will be I will have to make everyday the best I can. I will have to strive hard to be happy as much as possible. Any day could be my last, but I don’t think of it as a punishment or a curse. I think of it as an excuse to always have a smile on my face.
"Lost Time is Never Found Again"
This quote achieves this meaning by calling upon the reader to take action. It provokes a feeling of guilt, as though the audience is not living up to its expectations as a human being. This guilt comes from the fact that we are so fortunate to have this time right now, and you may not be doing everything in your power to make the best of it. As part of the audience, I feel this guilt so strongly because it makes you regret past decisions and think about the future. It creates a sense of hope as well. This is known by the fact that we can still find time in our future, though the past may be lost. We still have a chance.
This aphorism uses inductive reasoning to express its message. This is known because the message is constructed off of certainty. You cannot go back in time—this is certain. Its foundation is laid with known facts, and a theory is created. With this theory, one can build a better future while knowing this information. This logical argument could be considered deductive as well, because it relies on truth to bring about a logical conclusion. Therefore, though the truth may be harsh, time is being lost so we must spend it wisely. Contrarily, I feel this quote focuses more on pathos and ethos. It evokes emotion from the audience through its sense of regret for the past and anticipation for the future. The reader is called upon to think about what they are not doing right or what they could be doing better. This is tied to ethos, because there are some ethics behind wasting time that could be cherished by someone else. For example, those dying of cancer would do anything in their power to have the confidence that they will find their time tomorrow. Your time wasted, could be another person’s time cherished.
In addition, this quote has a unique approach of conveying its message through its ironic word choice. Even with as little as six words, Benjamin Franklin was able to impact the audience. He plays on the term “Lost and Found;” like how an object that goes missing can be easily found, returned and reused. It can even be lost again, and this cycle may continue because it is just a possession or a tangible item. However, an intangible object such as time can never be found again. Once it flies past you, it’s not coming back—it won’t be found and returned, and you definitely will not get the chance to reuse it again. Similarly, time can be juxtaposed to other important intangible aspects of life, like love. Much like our limited opportunities with time, one can either embrace love or waste it. The feeling of being loved should be valued, like time. If it is wasted, it will follow the same path as the time that went with it, and the opportunities that were once offered to you will have been squandered.
Though there are many aphorisms that focus on living in the moment, I feel this quote is unique in its diction. It provokes several emotions that call the reader to action, and it uses a tinge of irony to put these words into thoughts. Though its message may be clichéd, its delivery is short and original. Because it is of few words, it leaves more thought and interpretation to the reader than other quotes that are hackneyed and overused. The message is clear, but the afterthoughts are more abstract and personal to the reader and can be interpreted to fit their own life. To me this quote stood out because of how I interpreted it and what I thought it meant. I am impatient and want to make my life worthwhile now while I still can because it is not certain that I will have the opportunity to tomorrow. I believe that there are positive effects of being impatient when it comes to dealing with difficulties. Some hardships are weakening, and I feel impatient when it comes to creating my own happiness and strength. Because I will never find lost time, I believe it is under my own empowerment to improve the situation at hand or in the moment.
In conclusion, my impatience for fulfillment is based off of the idea of this aphorism. Benjamin Franklin phrases it creatively and evokes emotion from the reader through logos, pathos, and ethos. He proclaims, “Lost time is never found again”, and this is a thought that should be evoked in each individual to ensure a better lifestyle for all. As interpreted, one should not dwell in the past, for it is lost. The only time you have for certain is the time you have found now, and it should be embraced and enjoyed—not wasted and regretted.